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you find and leave friends in stages,
                 cycles,
seasons.
you are the epitome of treason-
in which friends become liars
that no longer douse, but set fires.

[you stole what i to offer you,
packed them in dust alongside old feelings,
and moved to someone new.]



(p.s. friendships arent homes you rent
for a discernible amount of time spent)


i've never seen the colors in a persons eyes
dull as quickly as yours did.
in my presence? a hue i'd despise
and in others? well, a little less clouded.
a
n
d
s
o
they leave.
not the emotions,
but
the memories and the notions
of forever.

{you claimed to despise broken promises and the hypocrite,
yet did the same, denying how the shoe fit-
forgetting that friendships require loyalty and gentle wit.}

we may not have been in lust
but you can't say relationships lack love!
i'm still trying to find the line i must have crossed
to go
       from friend
                      to foe.

(things you said what feels like years ago
have embed within my psyche
paragraphs upon how my thoughts can't grow-
past words, now a distinct part of me)
i'd rewrite my life to delete your chapters
idk
what do u guys think-
also idgaf about poetry rules
this makes sense to me and that's all i care about
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i tried to tell my story
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rewrite it

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Little-Tin-Wings Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:huggle: Hello!  The Daily Bread Cafe sent me! :iconalphamanifest: :iconc-a-harland:
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AElfrics-Cat Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :juggle:
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
and thank you for the watch back!
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Rewrote Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's no problem, I love your writing!!
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oaklungs Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013
:huggle:
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fervvent Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
thank you for the favourite (:
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Rewrote Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No problem!
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ilyilaice Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013
hi! i just went through your budding gallery and it seems interesting so far. keep writing, man. (: i enjoyed reading your works.
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Rewrote Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks so much! c:
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